Not bad
The sound was very quiet and it was hard to understand some of what they said even when i turned my volume up really loud. it was alright though.
Not bad
The sound was very quiet and it was hard to understand some of what they said even when i turned my volume up really loud. it was alright though.
i agree about the sound. i made this months ago, and wasn't inclined to go back and fix it.
hell, it was a miracle i found the energy to doctor NG's preloader.
Wow
I love the drawings, and how i guess you either used another program, or scanned some stuff in. Looked like crayons or something at some parts. The animation kind of needs work, but this one wasn't really relying on a lot of that.
yes, i used photoshop. And my drawing tablet. Its amazing what u can do with photoshop. Cause trust me, im very noobish compared to other artists with that program
It's all connected.
My first impression was just, why are so many different things submitted as one? I hate when people do that when it doesn't need to be done... But in this, it's connected in a really cool way. There's the little animation with the two characters, and then two eating games that are both related. Not sure i've seen anything like the monster game in flash before. I dont really like dress up games, and i'm not sure the tutorials fit in this at all, but it's still good.
thank you for you review it was very thorough! the reason i added everything was too make it enjoyable for a wider range of viewers. obviously you saw no need for the tutorial section but you seemed to like the animation and the games. not the dress ups though. thank you for your great review! this shows me that one you are aware of things. and two that my goal to please a wider range is kind of working. thank you again.
Usual Tutorial
I took an animation class, and the very first assignment was to do frame by frame animation. I thought it was a great way to start. Then again, i guess most of the animations sucked. Anyway... there's some funny stuff in this, but it's not really an original idea to do a tutorial type thing, and they get really old. Also, the graphics aren't really much better than stick figures. Not that you couldn't do better, just doesn't look like you tried to do better.
At least I can say it wasn't text boxes and buttons, and I will try to make the next one more "flashy."
*Pun not intended
Ep 1 and 2 are better
Your other two episodes at least seemed to have some originality (unless maybe you based them off the real spy vs spy things?). But this one was pointless. Graphics and everything are alright, but it's so short and there's nothing i enjoyed in it.
all episodes are based on ACUAL COMICS
Boring
I like real news more than I liked this. I had trouble understanding a lot of what they had to say. The sound quality of the demon thingy was crap. And then what i could understand was just completely boring. For the most part the graphics sucked, but there was so much going on that my computer didn't seem able to handle it very well. Putting it on low quality didn't seem to do much, cause the problem is that there were too many things on the screen. Scrolling words were possibly a problem.
Ya, my slow comp has problems with it too, it's a hundred times better on faster pc's. There's nothing i can do to fix that unfortunatly.
Odd combination
Excellent graphics with everything except the people. You really need to work on the characters graphics. Sure, you're going with a weird anime style that i'm not into, but the least you could do is use curved lines. It was kinda hard to understand their voices, but it definitely helped that you had subtitles. I was still having trouble following the story though... You just sort of jump into it, with a bunch of characters i dont know or care about. Two different ships, and i couldn't tell who was in what, or that one was a villain.
well first, I'm trying to be original like drawing characters with no curved lines. Second, the villain was in a big ship which blasted the city. Many people said I jumped into the story with on meaning, well the first part is like a flashback. The next part will be about six mins long with the story in it along with a fighting scene. I promise you that. Anyway thanx for the good comment with a 5 on it_
Short
It's very short, and you ruined it a little by saying too much in your comments. If you didn't say in the commentary that he has trouble with it because he can walk on water, i wouldn't have seen it coming, and it would have been funnier. It's good though. Wish there was a whole mess of things with him trying to swim somehow.
Yeah, I just didn't want to overestimate people's intelligence. I did change the comments now after a couple more brought it up.
I may re-release it later with a couple more ideas I'm getting and perhaps see how it looks colorized.
Thanks for the review.
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