Not bad.
I like that song, so that made it better for me. Otherwise i might have gotten bored, but for that kind of story i think you pulled it off well. And it made me think, which is good... that i'd like to have a girlfriend and all that. One thing though... I wish you'd get better at drawing and animating your flash. In some ways it's an interesting stylized thing, like with the square eyes, but a lot of it just needs improvement. Of course, it's a lot better than so much of the stuff on newgrounds. I just like your style and some of your ideas, and want to see you get better.